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Knowing when to go
10:40 Jul 16 2009
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Like a wounded beast,

you poke, prod and feast.

Now I’m stepped back into a corner,

stay clear or you’ll be the mourner.

Keep your distance, watch my grin,

I’ll feed on your thoughts your sin.

Then see red and leap, jump for your throat,

expression froze, no time to gloat.

My teeth rip your flesh and mind with words unsaid,

blood covered nose nuzzles your meat, bone red.

Dissembled, mutilated. Can you see your death?

Remember me as you draw your final breath.

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BLOODLIFE
14:47 Jul 16 2009

I edited and lost my comments .. but thanks Sin for spotting that :-s

I couldn't leave it.

Dragonrouge
10:58 Jul 18 2009

Hah!

I love this little poem!

Theban
11:33 Jul 19 2009

Great work

Her Crime
11:36 Jul 06 2009
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Her life is fine, she has her ups and downs like anyone,

a fairly normal life when all is said and done.

But here’s where she differs from the norm,

she has her very own rainbow that she can wish upon.

A multicoloured safety net is ready to catch her fall,

she’s knows this but is scared to make that call.

But does she know that even rainbows fade with time?

That may be her only regret, her crime.

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